The Helping Hand

This service is geared to authors who have completed a draft of a novel or memoir (of up to 80K words*).

PROJECT FEE

$3,000 +HST paid as follows:

  • $500 deposit paid upon signing contract.

  • Remainder paid after my feedback has been submitted.

  • Note: HST is calculated based on where the client lives.

  • $100 discount for clients who book The Running Start at the same time.

*If your manuscript is over 80K words, we can chat about the fee.

Here’s a little more information about my experience and expertise.

WHAT’S INCLUDED

  • A pre-evaluation meeting (1 hour) during which we discuss your artistic goals for the book so I can my ensure feedback is most useful. We might talk about themes, inspiration, and literary influences.

  • A close read of your manuscript

  • Detailed notes on your manuscript (between 7-12 pages). Feedback is divided into three sections: what I think the story is about/ what it appears the story is trying to accomplish; strengths; and areas for improvement. Feedback might revolve around pacing, characters, dialogue, plot, story arc, etc.

  • Comments in the margins, perhaps to highlight strong passages, note confusion, raise questions, or suggest revisions.

  • Follow up meeting (1 hour) to discuss the feedback and consider your next steps.

NOT INCLUDED

Although I will highlight issues like tense confusion or awkward word choices in the margins, I don’t offer copy editing. It’s not very useful to get mired in grammar and spelling at the developmental edit/ substantive revision stage.

Sharon has a keen understanding of the shape of a story—finding the kinks and knowing what can be done to smooth them out.
— Carmella Gray-Cosgrove, author of Nowadays and Lonelier